WISH
Posted: December 23, 2011 Filed under: reflections n ideals | Tags: despair, heart, hope, life, light, love, nostalgia, quest, self, veil, verses 26 Comments »
hollow embrace and a hollow hope
something that my soul did grope
after that it had lost all bliss
reminiscing the fading morning kiss..
and a hand thus stoned as it clinched your touch
and a heart going cold having housed pain much
in the shallow sunlight who can find a sultry shadow
and shelter a bemused heart in a maze of inane credo
a heart that seeks fire, a heart that never rests
a heart that loathes to die, failing its own death
a shuddering wish lurks in the crater of despair
the flame of love was kindled to light the heart’s lair
it will keep on tearing the veils until it finds you there..
Hmmm well i wish it meets soon cant take the pain and the tearing of the veils ..
aww thanks for your Wish Bik
bless you buddy 
[...] WISH [...]
intense stuff!
thank God I never believed in love. lol
lol, hey good gal now dont fall in love as well
Please tell us more about that ‘wish’
I have no answer to that question, Mahlaqa
. Guess I just wanted to read more into it. But you’re right, why must you?
heyyyyy dont be so serious.. i was just kidding baba. it was harmless fun to say that. gosh. hey my blog is replete with my wishes dear
if u havent read my older posts thay can be a good read if u have some time to spare..
Haha. I know. I was just playing the emotional card :p. And I was actually referring to the flow
lol, okie
dont know if i will keep writing i might write more cindering wishes …
Why this emphasis on rhymes?
hi there long time
n well cz my prose is like free verse most of the time 
I liked that writing Princess
You write with such beautiful romantic nostalgic emotions
I wish you much love and happiness and a beautiful Christmas
Ian aka Emu
hey there Ian
thankyou so much for ur words and wishes. lots of love and wishes for a wonderful Christmas to u too my friend
No emotion is easy let alone getting a grip on love and it’s intensity. I think for many if there was an option on this emotion it would be never to fall in love, shame it’s not optional.
Great stuff as usual… I liked the effect the word “grope” has in the 2nd line. Brave move and it paid off.
I am at verge of death,
atleast now manifest youself,
you would still be true to your words
and
my desire will be put at rest…….
wowww
nice Zahir..
thanks
and a hand thus stoned as it clinched your touch
and a heart going cold having housed pain much
the flame of love was kindled to light the heart’s lair
it will keep on tearing the veils until it finds you there..
Mmm good!
thanks much Khanum and where art thou sweet heart??
sametney gaye thay kisi bewafa ko
khud bikhar ker beth gaye !
now this is one thing u must stop doing!!!!!
Mahlaqa…………..
i wonder when will we b able to meet our lord
Its tiring..living here in this strange world. wallahi..
I agree totally.. but well sometimes He Himself comes to pay a visit
…so many deceits in this world..
piety has no value now?..
we come to realize the Separation from Allah an ultimate tragedy in life when the reality of the world manifests upon the soul..
Heart just wishes to go to the final abode then. Our True Home!!!
May Allah protect us while we’re here. its a damn strange world…….